The Spider Who Grew Ten Feet Tall

December 2, 2011 by
Filed under: Grayson 

Grayson came  home with a story he had written in October. He has written short sentences or paragraphs before, but this was the first full story. If you click on the image below, you can see it in a fuller size. Here is a translation if you need it:

(Skip this and try reading it first, if you like)

 

The spider who grew ten feet tall

On a dark and gloomy night five scientists were thinking about a great spider. The spider had been there for centuries. It had laser eyes. The whole town was destroyed. The scientists had been making a lazer. To destroy the spider. The spider lived in the old castle. Five months later the laser was finished. They got it ready they aimed it they shot the laser. At the old castle. The castle exploded. The spider was dead they cheered!! After that the people grew again. I was one of the scientists.

 

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5 Responses to “The Spider Who Grew Ten Feet Tall”

  1. Margaret Marquis on December 2nd, 2011 11:50 am

    Grayson did a great job on his first real story – there’s a problem and a logical solution – plus there’s the final sentence which gives extra excitement.

    Thanks for sharing it!

  2. Nana and Papa Chrisawn on December 2nd, 2011 7:51 pm

    Grayson,
    Your story is really exciting. We are also really impressed by your handwriting. Hugs and kisses!
    Nana and Papa

  3. Pam on December 3rd, 2011 12:36 am

    Congratulations to Grayson for writing such an imaginative and suspenseful story! :-)

  4. Nancy Morgan on December 3rd, 2011 10:32 am

    That’s so exciting! Can’t wait to read more stories from Grayson!

  5. Adrianne on December 13th, 2011 9:44 am

    What a creative story, Grayson! Keep writing :)

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