Evan’s Christmas Story

December 18, 2008 by Andrea
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I went to Evan’s school today and was able to talk to his teacher for a few minutes. She wanted to make sure that I had seen the story Evan had written this week and that she had posted on the wall outside of the classroom. I’ve tried to type it in just as he wrote it. Here is Evan’s story:

One day I was in my bed and I heard the faint sound of bels but not sleigh bels they where the bels that my Grandmo sewed on my stoking. I did not care to look doun stairs because Santa might see me and…

I would get in trouble I even might not get my presents that would usually go i my stocking! so I opend the window as quick as a flash. Then what do you know I saw all of santas reindeer oll exept one. Then I heard the sound of…

hoof beats! I thot about what I had said in my head erleyr that night! I thot about my four year old brother! my brother likes to wake up a lot in the night so I got up realy quiyatly and crep doun each and every…

step untel I got to the veary botem of the stairs. I saw a veary plup little man in a red soot and a flopy hat. I was santa santa did not notes me but I could see everything and I saw trouble! My brother…

was beahind the caoch geting ready to jump out and scare the raindeer that had been in the haos the hole time! I wistperd over to Grayson to come back up stairs but oll he did was nod his hed and boy I was scard…

that he would jump out and scare santa! With out thinking I hureed over to santa and said that Grayson was gowing to hurt his raindeer! Than Santa got eveary thing ready and we oll got to bed but Santa rode away on his sleigh.

Comments

4 Responses to “Evan’s Christmas Story”

  1. OLLIVER on December 18th, 2008 3:08 pm

    He spells almost as good as I do, and way better than most people who leave Youtube comments!

    Happy holidays

  2. Danielle on December 18th, 2008 3:47 pm

    Wow! He is so amazing. You can tell he is a child that is read to, a lot! I am glad his teacher recognizes his talent, too. (Though she would have to be blind not to see it)!

  3. Chad on December 18th, 2008 7:21 pm

    Sounds like something I expect to hear from anything between a fourth and sixth grade writing assignment. Andrew made us read it to him again!

  4. Pam on December 18th, 2008 11:19 pm

    I’m very impressed by Evan’s imagination and story telling/writing abilities. Merry Christmas to you all!

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